Last year, John Pugmire's
Locked Room
International published a worldwide exclusive, La
montre en or (The Gold Watch, 2019) by Paul
Halter, which was released in Chinese, English and Japanese
before it finally appeared in French – as well as marking his
return to the novel-length locked
room mystery. There was a five year gap between Le
masque du vampire (The Mask of the Vampire, 2014) and
The Gold Watch, but Halter is back and up to his old tricks
again.
Le mystére de la Dame
Blanche (translated as The White Lady, 2020) is Halter and
Pugmire's second "worldwide
exclusive in celebration of LRI's 10th anniversary year."
What better way to celebrate that milestone that with a ghostly
locked room mystery!
Halter uses the opening
chapter to grab the reader, spin them around a few times and push
them, slightly disoriented, straight into the story, which must have
been done to prevent even the most experienced reader from
immediately getting a foothold on the case – while not neglecting
to drop a clue or two. So the readers gets a lot to digest in the
first two chapters, but the gist is that Major John and Margot Peel
are en route to Buckworth Manor. Margot has been summoned
there by her sister, Ann Corsham, because their father, Sir Matthew
Richards, unexpectedly married his private secretary, Vivian Marsh.
Ann believes Vivian to be "a vulgar schemer" whose "plan
is obvious to everyone" except their father. She wants Margot
and John to come down to help "take the wool from over father's
eye."
However, this family
reunion doesn't breakdown in an outright civil war. On the contrary,
the sisters slowly warmed to their much younger stepmother and the
whole situation became kind of friendly, but then another woman
entered the household. The White Lady! A ghost which has haunted
Buckworth for centuries and she has uncanny knack to vanish, as if by
magic, every time she's cornered.
One night, Sir Matthew
wakes up, cold to the bone, turns on the light and sees the figure of
a woman standing in the middle of the room. A woman dressed in a
long, white cape and a white shawl over her head. She smiles, raised
her hand and contemplated touching Sir Matthew, but shook her head
and disappeared through the bedroom door with Sir Matthew on her
heels – who followed her into a small study at the end of a
corridor. Sir Matthew saw her open and shut the door behind her, but,
when he went after, "the strange apparition had mysteriously
vanished." There was no place, or room, in the study to hide
(for long) and window was closed. And this was actually not the first
appearance of the White Lady at Buckworth Manor.
In early summer, Sir
Matthew's other son-in-law, Peter Corsham, was a approached in the
park by the ghostly figure of a woman, "in all white," but
she quickly turned around and saw her go straight through a six-feet
high, wire fence "as if it didn't exist." So is the
village haunted or is someone playing the ghost to frighten the
people at the manor? The White Lady makes another appearance,
but this time, she strikes away from the manor house. And she leaves
a body behind!
Billy, Jack and Harry are
ten-year-old boys and the village troublemakers who are arguing over
their latest scheme when Billy tells Harry to go chew grass. So, in
response, Harry tore some leaved twigs from a nearby bush, stuffed
them in his mouth and started chewing, but they were twigs of
hemlock. And when Harry begins to feel sick, the White Lady appears
and touches him on the brow. Harry "staggered and dropped to the
ground" as a terrified Jack and Billy "watched her slowly
disappear into the darkness of the woods."
Inspector Richard Lewis is
the Buckworth policeman charged with investigating the initial White
Lady sightings and, when the child died, he contacted Scotland Yard,
but Superintendent Frank Wedekind has too many cases on his plate and
handed over this brainteaser to his old friend, Owen Burns – an
aesthete who appreciates murder as a fine art. Burns tells his friend
and Watson-like chronicler that they're up against "the most
implacable enemy of all" against "whom one can do
nothing." Burns acts as much as an enigma as the murderer and
shows full mastery over "the art of uttering mystifying words"
and keeping everyone else in the dark about "the fruit of his
cogitations." He also shows a great deal of interest in the
village recluse, Lethia Seagrave, who lives alone with her animals
and earns money with fortune telling. But is she the White Lady?
Neither the police or Burns seem to get to a speedy conclusion. All
the while, the White Lady continues to terrorize Buckworth Manor like
some demented Scooby Doo villain!
The Gold Watch |
In one instance, the White
Lady managed to disappear from a corridor when all the exists were
under observation and this impossibilities comes with a floorplan,
but an accumulation of impossible situations and inexplicable
apparitions is a double-edged sword. Especially with Halter. On the
one hand, it makes for an exciting and fun read, but delivering good,
or original, solutions for multiple impossibilities usually proves to
be a bridge too far. Halter's Les
sept merveilles du crime (The Seven Wonders of Crime,
1997) is a textbook example of biting off more than you can chew and
The White Lady unfortunately is no exception.
Two of the miraculous
vanishings have such disappointing solutions that you have to wonder
why they were presented as locked rooms in the first place. One of
them actually had a good reason to be underwhelming, but it would
have been better if the White Lady in these two instances had simply
disappeared behind a corner or tree, because as badly done impossible
crimes, they kind of knocked down the whole story a peg or two –
instead of enhancing the plot. These two poorly handled
disappearances are a serious blotch on an otherwise well done and
typical Halter detective novel.
Halter showed more
ingenuity with the two murders and his presentation of the White Lady
throughout the story. The seemingly accidental poisoning of Harry and
the ghostly appearance was more in line with what readers expect from
an impossible crime and the second death was not unjustly described
by Burns as "a Machiavellian murder." A cruelly executed,
nearly perfect, murder that the killer could have gotten away with
had it not been for those meddling detectives. I compared the White
Lady with a demented Scooby Doo villain, which is how she's presented
and it worked for me. Halter didn't take the Hake
Talbot route by loading the story with an eerie, claustrophobic
atmosphere in which a phantom-like entity appears as easily as she
disappears, but admits there's something strange and earthly about
the ghost. A ghost who sometimes "traverses walls and wire
fences without difficulty" but, at other times, "she opens
doors and windows in her path." It drives home the idea that
someone, somewhere, is playing a deep game. This is what makes it so
disappointing that only one of the impossible crimes is up to scratch
and the result is that The White Lady doesn't come anywhere
near to matching its marvelous and ambitious predecessor, The Gold
Watch.
So, on a whole, The
White Lady was a good and fun read, but very much a mid-tier
Halter novel in line with Le
brouillard rouge (The Crimson Fog, 1988), La
mort vous invite (Death Invites You, 1988) and the
previously mentioned The Seven Wonders of Crime. And that's
disappointing coming right after a time-shattering detective novel
with a plot covering an entire century! Honestly, I begin to believe
Halter is actually better at handling and exploring wondrous themes
than hammering out hard locked room-tricks. La
chambre du fou (The Madman's Room, 1990), Le
septième hypothèse (The Seventh Hypothesis, 1991),
Le
cercle invisible (The Invisible Circle, 1996), L'homme
qui aimait les nuages (The Man Who Loved Clouds, 1999)
and The Gold Watch are some of his best and most memorable
novels, which don't lean heavily on their impossible crimes. Even
when they're really good.
I can only recommend The
White Lady to long-time Halter fans and advise readers who are
new to his work to start somewhere else.
I totally agree with you. As a Halter's fan, I've enjoyed this book even if I don't consider it as one of his masterpieces. Here a problem I've encountered in many Halter novels reappears: he exaggerated in putting so many impossibilities that he can't handle them in a good way. This is, in my opinion, why Halter can't be compared to Carr: the former puts too much material; the latter creates balanced plot, with few but well constructed impossibilities. For example, Demon of Dartmoor has a wonderful central trick, spoilt by too many absurd events and apparitions.
ReplyDeleteBut I love Halter, so I can turn a blind eye on him.
Yeah, the comparisons with Carr has never done him any favors and remember how disappointed most people (me included) when The Lord of Misrule was finally released in English. Halter had been hyped for years as the second coming of Carr, but Halter turned out to be a very different writer. And very French. ;) But have grown to appreciate him for what he did instead of what we expected him to do. I just a little disappointed that this one came right after The Gold Watch.
DeleteYes, "The Gold Watch" is my favourite Halter for now. The central trick is wonderful, one of the best I've ever read and the only I've nothing to complain about. I love also The Fourth Door and Tiger's Head, very complex novels, but they have also their faults.
DeleteThen I appreciate more Burns than Twist, the latter being one of the most dull detectives in the mystery fiction.
Thanks TomCat for the review. :)
ReplyDeleteI've heard less-than-encouraging comments about this recent title, but if it's in the same class as 'Crimson Fog and 'Seven Wonders' - or even 'Lord of Misrule' - I'd happily read it with lowered expectations. My main concern is that I've heard rumours that the central conceit for 'White Lady' is an inferior deployment of a trick found in Carr's 'He Who Whispers', which I haven't read - and so will only read 'Lady' after 'Whispers'.
I haven't yet read 'Phantom Passage', 'Gold Watch', 'Demon of Dartmoor' and 'Man Who Loved Clouds' - would you rank any alongside 'Seventh Hypothesis'? To date I still think 'Hypothesis' is his best work.
That's not an easy question to answer, because they're all very different types of mysteries. The Phantom Passage has one of Halter's best and most imaginative impossible crime, but the overall plot can be cited as an example of him overdoing it a little (e.g. the visions). The Demon of Dartmoor is one of his best written novels that showed he could do something with the setting, but is it better than The Seventh Hypothesis? I honestly don't know. But it's a good one. The Man Who Loved Clouds is a personal favorite of mine and is basically a Gladys Mitchell-like crime fantasy with impossible crimes. The Gold Watch is the only I would recommend as possible better than The Seventh Hypothesis, but no guarantees you'll agree.
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