Last year, I tackled the
first two parts of Paul
Doherty's historical "Telamon Triology," The
House of Death (2001) and The
Godless Man (2002), which takes place in 334 BC and follows
the tribulations of a talented young physician, Telamon – who's the
trusted confident of his boyhood friend, Alexander the Great.
Alexander and Telamon were raised together, as boys, "in the
Grove of Mieza at Aristotle's academy," but Alexander's
god-like aspirations ensures an endless supply of challenges for the
level-headed physician.
The red-thread running
through this trilogy is the escalating war activities between Macedon
and the sprawling Persian Empire of Darius III.
Alexander has captured or
sacked city after city and has crossed into Asia, but Darius III and
his menacing spy, Lord Mithra, have been plotting his downfall and
even enlisted a Greek mercenary, Menno of Rhodes. One of the few
generals to have defeated Macedonian troops in battle. Persian
assassins and spies have been active in Macedonian army camps (The
House of Death) and captured cities (The Godless Man),
which resulted in a bloody trail of revenge, intrigue and miraculous
murders dragged across Alexander's marching route "to the edge
of the world" – solved by the agile mind of Telamon. Lion of
Macedon was now poised to take "the great prize."
The Gates of Hell
(2003) is the final book of the "Telamon Triology" and Alexander
has set his sight on the city of Halicarnassus with its deep harbor
on the Aegean. If the city falls, every sea port on the Aegean will
be Alexander. Something that's easier said than done.
Halicarnassus is well
fortified with "towers, walls and citadels" with its
southern line "protected by the sea and the Persian navy."
A moat has been dug around the city "twenty-five feet broad and
very deep," which Alexander has to cross before he can attack
the walls, but the conditions outside the walls are extremely
unfavorable to an invading army and it's "almost impossible to
mine underneath" – making the city practically unconquerable
without an Archilles' Heel. Well, if a legend is to be believed,
there's a weak spot in the city's defensive bulwark.
Pythias was a sour,
embittered, but brilliant, mathematician who claimed King Pixadorus,
of Halicarnassus, had "cheated him out of certain treasure,"
but Pixadorus dismissed these accusations as nonsense. After a while,
the king grew tired of accusations and threatened to seize Pythias'
wealth. So he fled the city, but left behind a cipher, known as the
Pythian Manuscript, which revealed both where the treasure was hidden
and "an intrinsic flaw" in one section of the city wall. A "terrible weakness" any besieger could exploit. Alexander
is in possession of the cipher!
Pamenes is a skillful
scribe "versed in translating secret codes and ciphers,"
who's one of scholars laboring on deciphering the Pythian Manuscripy,
but he has not emerged from his room. A room known as the Ghost
Chamber with creaking floorboards that has inspired ghost stories,
but sadly, nothing is done with the room. Anyway, the creaking
floorboards is how people in the room below heard the scribe pacing
up and down. However, the door remained bolted and there's no answer
to the knocking. So the door is battered down and the body of Pamenes
is found on the pavement outside, under the open window, with bird
seed scattered around him, which suggests an accidental fall, but
Telamon suspects foul play – begging the question how a murderer
was able to enter or leave a locked room. This is not the only
(quasi) impossible situation in the story.
Alexander and Telamon
believe there's a spy in their camp who, somehow, has found a way to
dispatch incredibly detailed messages with "a richness of
information" into the besieged city. The messages must have
been incredibly detailed that it's very unlikely, if not impossible,
someone shot an arrow with a message attached to it over the city
wall.
Doherty has never been
squeamish about padding the body count of his stories and The
Gates of Hell is no exception.
A cook and his daughter
are poisoned. A Cretan archer is murdered a mile from Alexander's
camp and the murderer took his bow and arrows. A woman is found
strangled to death in the Ghost Chamber, which appeared in the room
after it had been searched. This all takes place against the bloody
siege of Halicarnassus. Needlessly to say, this really pads the body
count of the book and that's not even counting a number of
executions.
So this makes for a very
eventful and exciting story full with epic battles, spy activities,
ciphers and bloodshed, but Doherty is at his best when seamlessly
intertwines historical events with the detective story and The
Gates of Hell fell a little short of the mark – because there
was only one plot-thread that delivered. The method the spy used to
dispatch detailed information to the besieged city was beautifully
simple. And neatly linked to the cipher. I suppose the cipher could
be a good second, if the average reader actually stood a chance at
solving it.
However, the solution to
the locked room murder of Pamenes was disappointing. I would have
been happy with something half as clever as the impossible fall from
the locked tower room in A
Murder in Thebes (1998), but this locked room-trick was
uninspired. It didn't help that the clueing was sparse and the main
culprit stood out like a sore thumb.
The Gates of Hell
is strong on historical content and a fine example of Doherty's
talent to write mystery novels as historical epics, brimming with
historical battles, events and figures, but this time with a very
middling plot – ending the Telamon Triology on a weak note. So not
one of Doherty's most successful historical mysteries.
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