Enid
Blyton's The Rat-a-Tat Mystery (1956) is the fifth of six
novels in The
Barney "R" Mystery series, the only series she wrote for
children over the age of eleven, which follows the exploits of "a
down-at-heel circus-boy," Barney – whose sole companion used
to be his pet monkey, Miranda. A rather lonely existence that ended
when he befriended two siblings, Roger and Diana Lynton, along with
their mischievous, trouble-making cousin, "Snubby," in The
Rockingdown Mystery (1949).
So now they're spending
their holidays together and these sleepovers generally result in the
Lynton home resembling a disaster-stricken area.
The Rat-a-Tat Mystery
opens with Mr. Lynton putting down his newspaper, as a crash came
from upstairs, asking his wife "how long do these Christmas
holidays last." Christmas had been "a mad and merry time"
in the house with a drizzling rain keeping the children indoors and
Snubby's always enthusiastic black cocker spaniel, Looney, sweeping
through the place "like a hurricane" – slowly driving
Mr. Lynton to his limits. Luckily, an unexpected telephone call from
Barney invited Roger, Diana and Snubby to come and stay with him for
the remainder of their holiday at a big lakeside house that his
grandmother owns. Apparently, Barney found his long-lost family in
The Rubadub Mystery (1952).
Rat-a-Tat House is an
old, remote place with turrets, towers and tucked-in windows, where "Oliver Cromwell once stayed" and "a celebrated
Spaniard" was imprisoned, which lays at a now frozen lake. The
house also has a ghost story to tell.
Originally, the place was
named after the lake and village, Boffame House, but 250 years ago,
someone began hammering on the front-door with "the enormous
lion's head knocker." When the footman hurried to answer the
door, nobody was standing there. This phantom knocker went on for a
hundred-and-fifty years and people believed it was a warning that
there was "a traitor in the house," but it has been over a
hundred years since the ghost "hammered at the door" with
the lion-headed knocker. So why would it start it now, right?
Well, the first few days
at Rat-a-Tat House were pure bliss with them playing card games, ice
skating, snowball fights, tobogganing and building a huge snowman,
but the silence of the second night is broken by a strange, eerie
knocking sound ("RAT-A-TAT-TAT! RAT-A-TAT-TAT!") –
someone was hammering on the front-door with the knocker. When they
go investigate the following morning, they discover a singe track of
heavy boot prints going to the bottom of the front-door steps. There
were, however, "no footmarks showing that he walked away again."
Whoever this person was, he could not have entered the house through
the front-door, because it was securely locked on the inside with two
great bolts, top and bottom, two locks that were stiff to turn and "a
heavy chain." So how did this person manage to vanish into thin
air? And this is not the only impossible situation of the story.
Mrs. Tickle is the sister
of Barney's grandmother's cook and the adult supervision at Rat-a-Tat
House. She witnessed how the big snowman the children had made, which
has now disappeared, shuffled pass the kitchen window and had looked
inside! Add to this that the snowfall has cut them off from the
outside world and the presence of two of unsavory characters with an
interest in the cellar, they once again find themselves up to their
necks in trouble. Sadly, this charming and intriguing premise is as
good as The Rat-a-Tat Mystery is going to get.
I've praised Blyton's
superb handling of the clues and red herrings in The
Mystery of the Invisible Thief (1950) and the warm, lively
characterization and sparkling humor of The
Rilloby Fair Mystery (1950), which also had a clever
innovation on an age-old locked room-trick, but none of those
qualities were present here – as the plot is largely uninspired and
razor-thin. The solution to the single track of prints in the snow is
another oldie, but this time without a touch of originality and the
answer to the peeping snowman was disappointingly simple. And those
two shadowy villains lurking around the house? They only briefly
appeared, but mostly remain in the background and the conclusion to
these main plot-threads, which tied everything together, was concluded
off-page.
The Rat-a-Tat Mystery
still has some wintry charm and a lingering Christmas spirit, but
lacked the lively, sparkling humor and characterization of The
Rilloby Fair Mystery. It didn't exactly helped that the plot was uninspired and starved of even an ounce of
ingenuity. So you can say this was a bit of a letdown.
However, I don't want to
end this review on a sour note and so decided to give you my own two
alternative solutions to the two impossible situations from this
story. If only to prove why I'm everyone's favorite locked room
fanboy (right, guys?).
Firstly, we have the
puzzle of the single track of boot prints in the snow, but my answer
depends on a third, mini-locked room puzzle: how where the villains
able to enter the kitchen when Mrs. Tickle had locked and bolted the
kitchen-door? The answer to this little side-puzzle is quickly found
and I would have used as both a clue and as the key to the ghostly
knocking on the front-door. In my scenario, one of the villains would
enter the house through the kitchen and unlocked the front-door,
while the other walked towards it, knocked and entered – locking the
door behind them and vanishing from the house
with their kitchen-door trick. This would make it appear as if the knocker had
impossibly vanished from the front-steps. You only have to come up
with an explanation as to how they got their hands on a (duplicate)
key to (un)lock the front-door.
My alternative solution
to the wandering snowman may seem obvious, but there were certain
items present in the story offering a way to make the situation
appear to be truly impossible.
I would have tightly
wrapped a piece of tarpaulin, taken from the boathouse, around one of
the toboggans and remade the snowman on top of it, because one
snowman looks very much like the other – especially if you dress
him up with the ornaments from the original snowman. And then you
drag it across the kitchen window. Why wrapped the toboggan in
tarpaulin, you ask? The tarpaulin helps make the track-marks of the
toboggan look (slightly) different from the track marks the children
made with the unwrapped toboggans. More importantly, it would give
the impression that the snowman had actually come alive and had
dragged himself through the snow.
So what do you think of
my two alternative solutions? Would you accept them as solutions to
these, admittedly, originally posed impossible problems?
Anyway, The Rat-a-Tat
Mystery was a huge disappointment after being pleasantly
surprised by the unexpectedly good The Mystery of the Invisible
Thief and The Rilloby Fair Mystery, which I didn't expect
from Blyton, but if you're looking for a harmless, wintry mystery
with a little charm, you can easily throw this one on your holiday
reading-list. Other than that, I can't really recommend it.
I found the final book in this series in a secondhand shop a little while ago -- the title escapes me for reasons I'm about to get to -- and upon researching discovered that it was generally accepted to be somewhat weaker in execution than most of Blyton's other tales of ratiocination. So perhaps that decline started here, and that's why this series ran to only six volumes compares to the Five Find-Outers and their fifteen.
ReplyDeleteNice "vanishing on the doorstep" idea, btw. Terry Pratchett did a similar thing with a vanishing assailant knocking on a door in one of his Discworld novels, but, naturally, that was only a throwaway moment in a far, far different sort of plot.
Snowman mysteries are always hard to pull off. Halter got about as close as anyone with 'The Abominable Snowman', but even that doesn't quite convince me. One of these days someone will manage it, I'm sure...
You mean The Ragamuffin Mystery?
Delete"So perhaps that decline started here, and that's why this series ran to only six volumes compares to the Five Find-Outers and their fifteen."
You could be right. This book revealed Barney found his long-lost father in the fourth novel, The Rubadub Mystery, which ended the story-arc of the series-characters. So maybe Blyton was trying to draw water from an empty well with The Rat-a-Tat Mystery and The Ragamuffin Mystery. That being said, I've high hopes for the third title in the series, The Ring o' Bells Mystery.
"Snowman mysteries are always hard to pull off. Halter got about as close as anyone with 'The Abominable Snowman', but even that doesn't quite convince me. One of these days someone will manage it, I'm sure... "
Edward Hoch wrote a good one ("The Problem of the Summer Snowman").
Anyway, you can see how disappointed I was by this one, because my typing was more sloppy than usual. So have edited some of the more glaring typos.
Huh, I'll try and track down that Hoch -- thanks for the tip. Would love t read an absolute belter of an impossible snowman story; the situation seems so specific that when someone gets it reight they're going to get it really right.
DeleteAnd yes, I was judging you for your typos. Me. Who never makes any. how do you show your face in (virtual) public? Good heavens.
Hoch also wrote "The Spy and the Snowman," which is supposed to be a good impossible crime story of the no-footprints scenario, but haven't read that one yet.
DeleteA thousand apologies for bluntly plowing through your language like I was Admiral de Ruyter at the Chatham Dockyards. :D
Sorry to hear that you didn't like this one. I guess I agree with you on the mystery aspects, but for me the winter ambiance of the whole thing rather makes up for it. And some nostalgia as well, I'm sure. :)
ReplyDeleteYeah, the charm of the wintry, snow-blanketed setting is the best aspect of the story and nostalgia can get you a long way, but Blyton has plotted better detective stories than this. You know, the plot is kind of important to me. :)
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