Nearly a year ago, I read
The
Affair of the Scarlet Crab (1937) by Clifford Knight, whose
career as a novelist was launched when The Affair of the Scarlet
Crab emerged as the first ever winner of the Red
Badge Mystery Prize – netting him $2000 and a publishing
contract. Knight would go on to publish more than twenty detective
novels over the next fifteen years.
The Affair of the
Scarlet Crab takes place during a scientific expedition en
route to the Galapagos Islands, but the snail-like pacing, lack
of excitement and a lackluster conclusion resulted in an average
mystery novel at best. However, this was Knight's first crack at the
detective story and debuts tend to be less than perfect. So I wanted
to explore Knight's work further to see how he developed as a writer,
eyeballing The Affair of the Limping Sailor (1942), when I
struck a well of disheartening comments.
The Anthony Boucher
Chronicles: Reviews and Commentary, 1942-47 (2009) has very
little good to say about either Knight or his series-character,
Professor Huntoon "Hunt" Rogers.
Anthony
Boucher admitted in his reviews that Knight is excellent when it
came to the local color of his novels, but has "an infallible
formula" consisting of nothing more than Professor Rogers
picking "a picturesque locale, calmly watch a series of murders
committed under his nose" and after 60,000 words accuses
someone "who obligingly confesses all" – as a rule his
deductions are nothing more than "pure guesswork." Boucher
remarked in his review of The Affair of the Dead Stranger
(1944) that he only kept reading the series in the hope that some day
a murderer will say, "OK, Hunt, now prove it."
So not exactly a glowing
endorsement and an opinion backed by two genre-experts, Curt
Evans and John
Norris, who commented on my review of The Affair of the
Scarlet Crab. John warned me that “the slow pace and lack of
excitement are his unfortunate stock in trade” and Curt called
one of his supposedly better novel, The
Affair in Death Valley (1940), a “put-downable”
read that took several days to finish. None of this was very
encouraging, but, I reasoned, maybe the short story format was better
suited for Knight's limited abilities as a plotter. Well, I'll say
this, the problem with the pacing was solved... kind of.
"The Affair at the
Circle T" was the first short story about Professor Huntoon Rogers
and, believe it or not, was originally published in the October,
1946, issue of Ellery Queen's Mystery Magazine as a fourth
prize winner of a short story competition – anthologized later that
year in The Queen's Awards (1946). I find it amazing that a
simple landscape writer and average plotter, like Knight, can rake in
prizes while a talented, innovative writer and plotter, like
Harriette
Ashbrook, bathed in the shade of obscurity.
As you probably guessed
by now, "The Affair at the Circle T" and the short story format
did nothing to cover up Knight's short comings. If anything, it
exposed them even more!
The story and plot "The
Affair at the Circle T" is very simple and straightforward:
Professor Huntoon Rogers is on a fishing holiday in the High Sierras
and visits the owner of the Circle T ranch, Buck Chamblis, where a
murder had taken place the previous day. Professor Rogers listens the
lion's share of the story of what has happened before his well-timed
arrival. A dame from New York, Mrs. Rolard, had come down to Nevada
for six weeks in order to secure a divorce from her third husband.
She had rented a cottage on the Circle T ranch.
Mrs. Rolard was the kind
of woman "a normal man would just naturally want to cut her
throat," but her soon-to-be ex-husband followed her to the dude
ranch and she already found a new toyboy, which doesn't prevent them
from eating and singing songs together – everything seems very
amicable between the three of them. This situation abruptly ends when
Mrs. Rolard is ruthlessly murdered in her cottage. Only tangible clue
the police has is that the maid was shoved in the face outside the
cottage, but it was dark and she couldn't make out who it was.
However, she "smelled fish on the guy's hand." After
listening to this story, Professor Rogers orders a reconstruction and
(unfairly) deduces (being very generous here) a simple, uninspired
solution hinging on an obscure piece of trivia.
I've to admit that there
were two clues hinting at this solution, but, without knowing that
piece of trivia, you can only make an educated guess. The waver-thin
plot rests entirely on this "ha, gotcha!" revelation and the
murderer obligingly confesses, but it has to be weakest piece of
evidence for a solution I've ever come across in a detective story!
There were two suspects with a "fishy odor" on their hands
and Rogers never demonstrated why the other couldn't have done it,
which alone is enough for reasonable doubt. There's no supporting
evidence and the maid's testimony can probably be shaken in a
courtroom, because in the story itself there was a hint of duplicity.
So, no, Knight's "The
Affair at the Circle T" is not a good detective story in any shape
or form and think he might have been better suited for the
novel-length mystery after all, because the local flavor of his
setting can paper over some of his short comings as a story-teller
and plotter. I'm still going to read The Affair in Death Valley
or The Affair of the Limping Sailor, but then I'll close the
book on Clifford Knight and Professor Huntoon Rogers. Maybe...
Sorry to end this second
review of the year on such a downer, but I'll try to do some quality
control for my next read.
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