In my review of Douglas
Clark's Death
After Evensong (1969), I briefly referred to a now obscure,
post-WWII mystery writer, Roger
Ormerod, who carried on to write detective stories grounded in
the traditions of the Golden Age during the seventies and eighties –
a period when the genre had moved towards realism and psychology.
Somehow, I remembered reading The
Weight of Evidence (1978) and More
Dead Than Alive (1980) only last year, but my reviews date
back to 2017. So it was high time to tackle another one of Ormerod's
locked room mysteries!
An Open Window (1988) is the fourth entry in the Richard and Amelia Patton series and the story begins with an explosive opening chapter!
Richard and Amelia have
been traveling around England in a fourteen-foot caravan, more out of
necessity than pleasure, but they secured a regular spot on a caravan
site and arranged with the owner he would try to keep plot 13 empty.
When they return, they find a woman has taken their spot. Nancy
Rafton had been there for three days and had been making inquiries
about Amelia, but Richard learns this after Rafton's caravan explodes
– which killed her and put Amelia in the hospital. However, an
unexpected windfall swiftly diverts Richard's attention to an
entirely different set of problems.
Amelia has an estranged
uncle, Walter Mann, who recently died and his solicitor, Philip
Carne, tells Richard Mann had altered his will two days before he
died. A will that practically disinherited his children, Clare,
Donald and Paul, who each get ten thousand pounds.
The residue of the estate
goes to his niece, Amelia. This residue comprises of a furnished
house, several cars, a portfolio of investments and 51% of the shares
in Walter's company, Mann Optics. A factory that makes photographic
equipment with an estimated capital value of around half a million.
Richard is not only Amelia's acting power of attorney, but a former
policeman. And he becomes interested in the circumstances under which
Walter Mann died.
Two months before he
died, Walter become convinced his family was trying to kill him and
not only altered his will as a precaution, but began to lock himself
inside a wide, lofty third-floor suite of rooms with a lock on the
door that was "virtually un-pickable" – one of only two
keys was around his neck on a chain. The second key was in possession
of his loyal housekeeper, companion and surrogate mother of his
children, Mary Pinson. So when he tumbled from the open window of the
third-floor room, through the conservatory roof, everyone assumed it
was an accident.
After all, the door of
the room had been locked from the inside and the key was still on the
chain around Walter's neck. And his dog had been with him in the
room. So, if anyone had raised a hand to him, Sheba would have had "it off at the wrist."
The Weight of Evidence
and More Dead Than Alive proved Ormerod had an original bent
of mind when it came to constructing locked room puzzles. The former
handily linked the solution for an impossible disappearance to the
presence of two bodies in a bolted, long-forgotten basement room on a
construction site, while the latter is a galore of false solutions to
the problem of a vanishing magician from a locked tower room. And an
unusual true solution. By comparison, the impossible crime from An
Open Window is much more conventional and falls squarely in the
tradition of John
Dickson Carr, G.K.
Chesterton and Edward
D. Hoch. So the locked room-trick still has some flashes of
imagination, but there were parts that were slightly unconvincing and
the clue of the blood in the conservatory was unfairly withheld from
the reader. Richard also missed two obvious possible (false) solution
for the locked room.
So, purely as a locked
room mystery, An Open Window is decent enough, but hardly
outstanding or noteworthy. However, I do think the trick would
probably have worked better in a short story or novella.
The murder of Walter Mann
was not the only death in the family. Three months previously,
Clare's husband, Aleric Tolchard, fell down an iron staircase at the
factory and broke his neck, but the local police are treating his
death as a potential homicide – eyeing Chad Leyton as the main
suspect. Chad is the son of Walter's best friend and shareholder,
Kenneth Leyton, and the boyfriend of Philip Carne's sister, Heather.
All three were present at the factory when Aleric fatally tumbled
down those stairs, but only Chad has a strong motive. A dispute over
a brand new innovation in 3D photography Chad had developed in the
photographic laboratory of Mann Optics. This reminded me of the
revolutionary new formula for color photography from Maurice C.
Johnson's sole locked room novel, Damning
Trifles (1932), but here the 3D photography was merely used
to provide one of the suspects with a motive.
So probably assume by now
that I was completely unimpressed and An Open Window is
certainly the weakest of the three I have read, but the story was not
entirely devoid of merit.
An Open Window is
completely focused on disentangling the various plot-threads and
Richard has to be persistent to get even an atom of truth out of the
suspects, because they either lie to his face or avoid him all
together. There are very little side-distractions. The locked
room-trick may not have shown the same ingenuity as in his previous
novels, but the way in which he handled the altered will did have
that spark of originality. Why the murder was committed two days
after the change, is one of the central questions of the plot.
Finally, Ormerod skillfully dovetailed the solutions of the
explosion, the death at the factory and the locked room murder
together.
An Open Window is
an unevenly plotted, slightly overwritten and not always fairly clued
detective novel, but the unwavering focus on the plot and some clever
plot ideas balanced out some of its flaws – making it a
serviceable, instead of a terrible, detective novel. So don't make
this your first brush with Ormerod, but don't cross it off your list
in case you like his work.
On a final, related note,
Ormerod is listed in Robert Adey's Locked Room Murders (1991)
with three titles, A Spoonful of Luger (1975), The Weight
of Evidence and An Open Window, but Adey missed More
Dead Than Alive and And Hope to Die (1995) was not
published until four years later. Recently, I found Ormerod wrote at
least two more impossible crime novels, One Deathless Hour
(1981) and A Shot at Nothing (1993), and there may be more!
This makes him a notable locked room novelist during a period when
impossible crime mostly figured in short stories. Yes, I'm going to
take a look at all of them... eventually.