W.A.
Mackenzie
was a Scottish poet, journalist, illustrator, editor and writer who
served in Belgium, France and Italy during the First World War, where
he was awarded the Military Cross for bravery in combat, but
committed himself to humanitarian causes when the war ended –
serving as Secretary-General of Save the Children International from
1920 to 1939. Mackenzie even acted as the Pope's representative on
the British Save the Children Council. Not a bad resume at all. Just
as important as Mackenzie's war record and humanitarian work, if not
more so, was his contribution to the early, pre-Golden Age detective
story of the early 20th century.

From
1903 to 1916, Mackenzie produced eight novels of crime, detection and
mystery of which four feature Sir Nigel Lacaita, K.C.B., of Scotland
Yard. This series comprises of The
Drexel Dream
(1904), His
Majesty's Peacock
(1904), The
Black Butterfly
(1907) and The
Bite of the Leech
(1914), while The
Glittering Road
(1903), In
the House of the Eye
(1907), The
Red Star of Night
(1911) and Flower
O' the Peach
(1916) appear to be non-series, standalone titles. All eight are
obscure, out-of-print mysteries that even in the public domain
(Mackenzie died in 1942) stubbornly remain obscure and out-of-print.
Somewhat annoying as Mackenzie last novel has been on my wishlist
ever since reading about in Robert Adey's introduction to Locked
Room Murders
(1991).Adey
made special note of Mackenzie's Flower
O' the Peach
on account of its memorable detective, "the
rather common, aitch-dropping "Slow and Sure" Jackson," but also noted the book's connection to an untranslated, 19th century
French short impossible crime story, "Le verrou" ("The Bolt," 18XX) – written by poet and author Armand
Sylvestre.
Well, my interest was piqued! Not merely because it's one of those
tantalizingly obscure, out-of-print and reach locked room mysteries,
which helps, but it's also one of those all too rare, World War I era
mysteries. So was very surprised, and very pleased, when Serling
Lake
suddenly reprinted it back in February. I snapped up a copy faster
than an old school pulp writer could crank out a short story.
Just
one more thing, before getting to the story. I tried to find out if
Mackenzie wrote Flower
O' the Peach
prior to the outbreak of WWI or between soldiering on the continent,
but without result. I wondered as there's no mention of the war or
allusions to a war anywhere in the story. On the contrary, Mackenzie
wrote a piece of pure escapism blending crime, mystery and Ruritanian
romance with all the flourishes of a French popular novel from the
then turn-of-the-century ("we
Britishers live on French literature today...").
So even though the story evidently takes place around the time it was
published ("ain't
you never h'ard of Flyin' Machines?"),
it should be taken as an alternative cloud cuckoo 1916 where bad
things do happen, but nothing as devastating as a global war. I
wanted that cleared up as its status as a WWI era mystery was one of
the reasons it attracted my attention. So... with that out of the
way, let's get to the case at hand.
Flower
O' the Peach
begins on a pleasant, sunny May afternoon in Pall Mall as Sir Jacinth
Coke ("K.C.B.,
K.C.V.O., etc, etc.")
wanders into the Ambassadors' Club and spots an old friend, Baron
Eskilstuna, who's former representative of the King of Gothland at
the Court of Saint James. Baron Eskilstuna has come to London with a
mission: to look for a wife. Not a wife for himself, but a wife for
the youngest brother of the current King of Gothland, the Duke of
Dalecarlia. A year previously, the Duke was in Brittany to visit
Sainte Anne d'Auray when he saw the love of his life, but, before she
vanished into the crowd, took a picture and has done everything
within his power to put a name to that face as he intends to marry
her – having already secured permission from his brother ("...the
King is willing to permit a marriage").
That's not as easy a task as it would be today and the Duke finally
commissioned Baron Eskilstuna to find her, but the Baron has about as
much success as the Duke.
Sir
Jacinth comes to the rescue as he recognizes the woman in the
photograph. The woman is Brenda, daughter of his oldest friend Udo
Dapifer, who can "show
even better birth than your Duke." Udo Dapifer is currently staying at Dawling Hall and Sir Jacinth is
prepared to introduce Baron Eskilstuna, but, while "the
matchmakers were plotting and planning," Udo Dapifer died without knowing "a
Prince of Blood Royal was seeking in marriage the hand of his beloved
daughter." Shortly following Udo's death, his son and heir, Captain Godwin
Dapifer is murdered in his bedroom "door
bolted, window ditto." But the doctor dispels the possibility of suicide. So it's murder.
This
is the point where Olaf, Prince of Gothland, Duke of Delacarlia
enters the picture under the name of "Mr. Goodman" to place his
services entirely at the disposal of Brenda ("I
shall fight for her in this affair... and in the fighting I shall win
her").
And, as Mr. Goodman, he mainly tries to get hold of a green, blood
smeared ribbon and green dress belonging to Brenda rather than a
proper detective in a country house whodunit investigating a locked
room murder. But then again, that type of detective story was still
very much in its infancy in 1916. So it really isn't worth mentioning
the few other characters involved in this dance around the dress,
ribbon and solution to murder, except the previously mentioned "Slow
and Sure" Jackson.
Jackson
is the local jack-of-all-trade who does everything from digging
graves, gardening and delivering milk bottles to selling insurances
and now grabbing the opportunity to play a "rural
Sherlock Holmes." Or, as he calls it, "clim' the greasy pole of mystery an' bring down the leg o' mutton of
truth." Jackson gets ridiculed for trying to outsmart both the police and a
killer, "you
have made yourself ridiculous, Henry Jackson, by interfering in your
blundering way with the affairs of your better," but it's Jackson who finds an explanation for the problem of the
bolted door – which honestly left me in two minds. The locked
room-trick belongs to one of the categories of basic tricks from John
Dickson Carr's "Locked Room Lecture" from The
Three Coffins
(1935), but with a small, stylistic difference. Normally, this trick
is considered crude and not terribly imaginative. A trick usually
suggested as a simple, throwaway false-solution, but here the trick
appeared as smooth as French silk. I suppose that part of the trick
is what Mackenzie found so attractive in Armand Sylvestre's short
story "The Bolt."
I'm
not a fan of copy/pasting other people's work, but fair's fair,
Mackenzie gave Sylvestre all the credit for this version of the
trick in a story-within-a-story, of sorts, sequence. Jackson finds an
old news paper report about a murder trial in France where the
murderer used Sylvestre's idea to leave a body locked away behind a
bolted door, but a copy of the book was found in the killer's room
resulting in an arrest and trial. Mackenzie praises Sylvestre through
this newspaper report and even included a translated paragraph from "The Bolt" demonstrating how to work the trick as smoothly as
possible ("...gently,
oh! so gently").
While not entirely new, it made Flower
O' the Peach
feel somewhat ahead of its time as a locked room mystery with a
solution that comes across as far more sophisticated than was still
customary for the time. I really appreciated Mackenzie gave Sylvestre
his credit, because it would been very unlikely we would have ever
known.
Finally,
I should mention the unusual and memorable ending without spoiling
too much. Fittingly, Mackenzie gave Flower
O' the Peach
a fairy tale-like ending, but, like most European fairy tales, it's
not without grimness. Believe me, those last two pages are a trip! It
can even be argued it's the only time the war shows its influence
over the story, but with the happy ending the real world never got.
Like I said, Flower O' the Peach is pure escapism.
So,
other than the neat, if ultimately simple, locked room angle and the
character of “Slow and Sure” Jackson, Mackenzie's Flower
O' the Peach
is closer to the mysterious flight of fancies of Gaston
Leroux and Maurice
Leblanc than the impossible crimes of Carr or the early detective
stories of Sherlock Holmes. I can only recommend it, if you're in the
mood for something light, off the beaten track on a lazy afternoon. I
very much look forward what long forgotten, out-of-print treasure
Serling Lake is going to reprint next.