Henning Nelms was an
American magician and authored a trickster's manual, entitled Magic
and Showmanship: A Handbook for Conjurers (1969), but more
importantly, he penned two memorable examples of the locked room
mystery novel, The
Hangman's Handyman (1942) and Rim
of the Pit (1944) – published as by "Hake
Talbot." Two very popular novels among devotees of the
impossible crime tale.
Robert Adey praised
Talbot in Locked Room Murders (1991) as the only mystery
writer to "successfully emulate" John
Dickson Carr and Clayton
Rawson. A writer who combined "Carr's flair for atmosphere
and the bizarre" with "Rawson's magical tricks,"
which endeared the books to the avid locked room reader. Not as well
remembered are Talbot's two short stories.
"The Other Side" was
never sold during Talbot's lifetime and remained unpublished until it
was included in Murder Impossible: An Extravaganza of Miraculous
Murders, Fantastic Felonies and Incredible Criminals (1990), but
Jack Adrian frustratingly noted in the introduction Talbot wrote
numerous short stories featuring his professional gambler and
ex-convict, Rogan Kincaid – which also remained unsold and where
either destroyed or lost! A similar, horrifying fate befell the
third, full-length Rogan Kincaid novel, The
Affair of the Half-Witness. There is, however, a second story
that made it into print long before "The Other Side." It's just a
little bit more difficult to find.
As far as I know, "The
High House" has only appeared in the Spring, 1948, issue of the
Mystery Book Magazine and nowhere else. Not in English anyway.
"The High House"
begins, as you would expect from Talbot, with a dark, brooding story
of a deadly, century-old curse that lies upon the house of a
seafaring family. Back in the 1800s, Captain Thomas Danvers made "a
voyage to the Spice Islands" and brought back a handful of
natives, a father and four sons, who erected the family mansion. This
explains why "the house spoke imperceptibly yet insistently of
Oceania." Captain Danvers promised the natives to take them
back home on his voyage, but the promise was rescinded when he got
into the European trade. So the old native placed a curse on the
family home and then, together with his sons, flung themselves into
eternity from the captain's walk on the roof.
A curse promising that if "the heads of the Danvers family ever gave up the sea" to
settle down in the ancestral seat, "the house would kill them"
until "it had taken life for life" and it has lived up to
its promise – killing three men over a hundred-year period. So this
brings us to the present-day and the elderly, dying Admiral Nat
Danvers has returned to the family home.
There are four more
people in the house on that fateful evening: Everett Danvers is Uncle
Nat's last living relative and the house is being manned by the son
of the old Danvers' housekeeper, Steve Phelps. Anne Corwin is
Everett's love interest and she brought along that adventurous-minded
detective, Rogan Kincaid, who is asked by her "to lift the Doom
of the Danvers from Everett." Unfortunately, Kincaid's presence
is unable to prevent the Old Admiral falling to his doom from the
captain's walk when he was all alone on the roof-top. Or so it
appears!
However, "The High
House" suffers from the same problem as "The Other Side" in
that the premise was better than its ending with a solution lacking
the ingenuity of the locked room-tricks from the novels. Another
problem here, unlike in "The Other Side," is that the fall from
the roof-top is never really presented as an impossible crime,
because Talbot never showed why it should be considered a locked room
murder of sorts. Something weakening a solution that already some
dodgy parts in it.
The premise of "The
High House" perfectly demonstrates why Talbot is always compared
with Carr, eerily bringing together the lore of the sea with the
superstition originating from a far-flung island, but the execution
of the plot shows the short story format was not suited for Talbot's
talents – who obviously needed a novel-length canvass to work his
magic on. Regardless, I'm still grateful to have been able to judge
this story for myself and many thanks to a certain person who kindly
provided me with a copy.
Yeah, this is an odd one and difficult to get too excited about given, as you say, how the problem is presented. A shame, because it has a lot of potential, and Talbot showed himself to be significantly better at presenting impossible crimes in his novels...so it's difficult not to wonder why this is so underwhelming.
ReplyDeleteWhisper it, but maybe those other, lost stories weren't that good after all...
"Whisper it, but maybe those other, lost stories weren't that good after all... "
DeleteI refuse to be consoled on the lost stories! King's The Episode of Demoiselle D'ys probably wasn't that good, but Comming's One for the Devil and Talbot's The Affair of the Half-Witness were locked room masterpieces. I just know they were!
I'd agree with you and J.J. that this isn't his best story, though it's still a good enough read. But I would argue that "The Other Side" is pretty good, clearly better than this one. Mind you, I'm a bit biased since I have Hungarian ancestry. :)
ReplyDelete"The Other Side" is definitely the better of the two short stories with a clearly stated problem and decent solution, but neither anywhere near as good as the novels. Some writers are better fitted for the short story format than others.
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