"The first thing is to determine the murderer's motive. I don't mean his motive for murder, but for creating an impossible situation. That's very important, son, because it's the best kind of clue to the motive for murder."- Sir Henry Merrivale (Carter Dickson's The White Priory Murder, 1934)
What
never ceases to amaze me is the sheer volume of detective stories
published during the first fifty years of the previous century. You
can read all kinds of mysteries from this period for decades and
still come across writers, or books, you have never heard about.
Recently, I found another one of these obscure, long-since forgotten
mystery novelists who was credited with writing a locked room novel
and that, predictably, attracted my attention – like a moth to a
flame.
J.C.
Lenehan was an English mystery writer, who fought on the Somme
during the First World War, but slipped into an ordinary, unassuming
existence when he returned to civilian life. Lenehan married, resumed
his career as a schoolteacher and started writing detective stories
after school hours in the late 1920s. A simple life that ended when
he passed away at the age of only 53, in 1943, leaving behind a wife
and son who was serving in North Africa at the moment. I assume he
was part of the desert scuffles with Erwin Rommel in the North
African Campaign. Anyway...
Lenehan
also left the world with thirteen, now all but forgotten, detective
novels and probably have remained ignorant of their existence had one
of them not been listed by Robert Adey in Locked Room Murders
(1991).
The
Mansfield Mystery (1932) is Lenehan's fourth book and the opening
chapters take place on the Fifth of November, Bonfire Night, when the
sound of exploding firecrackers and the acrid smell of sulfur filled
the air – while children, "like demented savages,"
danced around a bonfire with a home-made effigy of Guy Fawkes at the
heart of the blaze. This the background of a Guy Fawkes Ball at the
residence of Gregory Halewood, a senior partner of a solicitors firm,
but the festivities are brought to an end by a telephone call from
his business partner, James Mansfield.
Mansfield
ruins everyone's day by announcing over the telephone that he's about "to blow out his brains" and several people immediately
rush to his house, five minutes away from the ball, where they have
to force the door of the study. On the floor, sprawled behind the
desk, lay the body of the solicitor with a single bullet hole in his
head and a gun clasped in his hand. The door of the study was locked
from the inside and the window was fastened from within.
So
the death is unmistakably a suicide, but a press representative,
Norman Glen, who happened to be present at the ball noticed a
tell-tale discrepancy in the time-table of events. And this proved to
be the first crack in a murder that was "planned as carefully as
an army strategist plans an engagement."
Detective-Inspector
Kilby, of Scotland Yard, takes over the investigation from the local
policeman, Superintendent Flint, who recedes into the background and
leaves Kilby with the task of disentangling the murderer from the
closely-knit circle of suspects – surrounded by a school of red
herrings. On the surface, this makes The Mansfield Mystery
appear as a stereotypical detective story of the period, about a man
murdered in the confines of his private study, with relatives and
associates dancing around his corpse. Unfortunately, Lenehan was
about as subtle as a severed, gushing artery wound and practically
gave away the entire game in the opening chapters of the book.
Consequently,
the story began to slightly drag, because the murderer was staring
you dead in the face, but Leneham persisted to play the game as a
straight-up whodunit and kept introducing obviously false leads.
Such
as the disreputable, drunk brother of Mansfield's foster-daughter,
Helen. Or the snuff-addicted confidential clerk of the firm, George
Tingley, who gave blackmail the good old college try, but disappeared
without a trace and apparently destroyed several ledgers in his wake
– which is all supposed to throw sand in the eyes of the readers.
However, Lenehan spilled all of the pertinent information in the
opening chapters and all these additional plot-threads, or red
herrings, accomplish is confirming the obvious. And this leaves the
reader with only a couple questions, which are either easily guessed
at or were explained away long before the ending.
One
of them is the alibi-trick. You can probably guess what happened
there, but the final explanation was, admittedly, somewhat cleverer
than expected. Secondly, there's the problem of the locked door of
the study, which is explained long before the halfway mark as "an
easy dodge" and "an ancient one" at that. So the
reader is left with little else to do except following the detective
as he slouches to the obvious and inevitable conclusion. This makes
the book a decidedly mediocre one, but the real black mark against it
is that, literally, all of its weaknesses could have been eliminated
had Leneham simply written it as an inverted
detective story.
The
murderer's handiwork and modus operandi was not entirely
without interest. A murderer whose idea of getting away with killing
someone is providing the police with a ready-made answer. But in
spite of the murderer's cleverness, this person is not an expert at
killing people and keeps making fatal mistakes. Like shutting the
eyelids on the accusatory eyes of Mansfield or throwing his last
victim from a moving train followed by an empty bottle of whiskey. So
the police found the body first and the bottle second, which is a
fact that does not agree with the scenario of an accident.
Detective-Inspector
Kilby also has some Columbo-like
moments when he interacts with the murderer and one particular
amusing scene is when Kilby remarked how a certain "trench would
make a fine grave." Once again, this remark shows Lenehan had
no idea how to be subtle, but that would not have mattered had the
story been an inverted mystery. Now it simply is a blunt giveaway
where a body had been hidden.
So,
all in all, The Mansfield Mystery is not a badly, or
unpleasantly, written detective story, but the mediocre, transparent
plotting made the book somewhat of a drag to read once you passed the
opening chapters. It's a pity Lenehan failed to realize he was
working with all the tools that could have made for a good, solid
inverted detective story in a somewhat similar vein as Richard Hull's
Murder
of My Aunt (1934) and Leo Bruce's Case
for Sergeant Beef (1947), i.e. a blundering (amateur)
murdering.
But
that's enough complaining for now. So allow me to end this blog-post
by direction your attention to my previous review, which discusses
Theodore Roscoe's I'll
Grind Their Bones (1936). A very obscure, but fascinating,
pulpy locked room novel set in an alternative time-line on the brink
of total war. And I'll probably have something light and more fun for my next
post.
Oh. I was hoping for a glowing endorsement, as there are a handful of Lenahan's novels available in my local Kindle store... But I guess one can't win all the time. :(
ReplyDeleteOh, I know. Lenehan's The Tunnel Mystery has an intriguing synopsis, promising something along the lines of Miles Burton's Death in the Tunnel, but my interest has somewhat waned now.
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