Previously,
I looked at John Russell Fearn's Within
That Room! (1946), a locked room novelette reminiscent of
Jonathan
Creek, published originally in the Toronto Star Weekly,
but the bare-bones of the plot had an earlier incarnation as a short
impossible crime story – which is under review today. Initially, I
picked two other little-known locked room stories, in order to pad
out this post, but I was unimpressed with both them. So I scrapped
them.
Fearn's "Chamber of Centuries" was first printed in the September, 1940
issue of Thrilling Mysteries and the plot has all the same
ingredients as its extended adaptation, but the story-telling here's
a lot tighter. "Chamber of Centuries" is practically the same
story as Within That Room!, but tells that story in less than
a dozen pages. Only place where they really differ is in the finer
details.
Thrilling Mysteries, Sep. 1940 |
One
of these differences are the protagonists, Dick and Jane, who enter
the picture here as a recently married couple traveling down to "the
sprawling, ill-organized township of Calford."
Jane
had no intention to return to the place of her ancestors, but Dick
wanted to spend a holiday in the town to "lay the family ghost"
who haunts one of the rooms in the dark, gloomy ancestral pile of his
wife – a house that had been transported to the Americas stone by
stone. Sir Jonathan Melrose was Jane's great-great-great grandfather
and he was notorious in his days as a dangerous, irresponsible
practical joker, which landed him in a spot of trouble in England. So
he had to pack-up, including his home, and sailed across the ocean to
the New World. However, he was followed by his enemies, who
eventually killed him in his bedroom, but Sir Jonathan foretold that "his presence would forever haunt the room."
The
ghost of Sir Jonathan returns to the room every June 22nd, at seven
in the evening, until "the house should be demolished."
There's also an evil, unsettling influence in the room that prevents
everyone from staying there for longer than three minutes.
After
the premise has been established, "Chamber of Centuries" largely
follows the same sequence of events as Within That Room: Dick
and Jane experience the evil influence when they entered the haunted
room for the first time. The two servants, Mr. and Mrs. Baxter, are
up to no good in the basement and a second inspection of the dusty,
ghost-haunted room brings them face to face with the translucent
figure of Sir Jonathan – a figure attired in old-fashioned clothes
with one hand dramatically out-thrust.
Regrettably,
this scene is not as good, or memorable, as the demonic manifestation
in the novelette and suppose that has to do with the sort of being
that appeared in that room. A trick that makes appear as if one of
the devil's henchmen entered a sealed chamber is far more impressive
than the ghostly manifestation of a long-dead practical joker.
Anyway,
the last part of this short story, like its opening, differs in some
regards from the novelette. There's no murder in this story and the
culprits are not as harshly punished here as in the novelette. A
second notable alteration can be found in the motive. Within That
Room! takes place in England, while "Chamber of Centuries" is
set in the United States, which required the motive to be slightly
modified. A modification that turned the motive into something that
some would describe as stereotypical American!
Finally,
the mental attacks weren't as well handled, or explained, here and
that has to with both a change in the methods and the shorter length
of this story, but, besides those minor details, the stories are
pretty much the same.
On
a whole, "Chamber of Centuries" is a fun, pulp-style impossible
crime yarn, but personally, I prefer the extended rendition of the
plot, because it allowed the best aspects of the plot to shine –
like the two main characters and the impossibilities in the haunted
room. It's without doubt the better of the two versions. So if you
plan to read one of these two stories, I highly recommend you go with
Within That Room! Or read it before the short story.
On
a final, unrelated note: I wanted to return to Christopher
Bush for my next read, but another short story collection found
its way into my hands. So that one is next on the list.
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