Paul
Doherty's The House of the Red Slayer (1992) is the second
novel in the Sorrowful Mysteries of Brother Athelstan series,
originally published as by "Paul Harding," which opens with a
prologue, set in 1362, showing Moorish pirates capturing a carrack in
the Middle Sea and massacring the passengers – pilgrims, merchants,
travelers and tinkers. A gruesome, long-forgotten episode that would
nonetheless lead to more bloodshed nearly two decades later.
A "murderously cold"
wind swept over London in December, 1377, which despite the ice and
hail is supposed to be "a time of innocence and warmth,"
but Sir Ralph Whitton, Constable of the Tower of London, exchanged
his comfortable quarter for a grim cell in the North Bastion tower.
The stairway to the room is guarded by two trusted retainers with the
door between the steps and the passageway securely locked. Sir Ralph
and his guards are the only people with keys to the doors.
The reason for these
security measures is that Sir Ralph receives "a drawing of a
three-masted cog" together with "a flat sesame seed cake,"
which frightened him enough to lock himself up. Sir Ralph also
doubled the wages of his guards and insisted that visitors be
searched, but the moat underneath the tower window became frozen
solid – opening a pathway to his assassin. An assassin who climbed
the wall using the footholds cut into the tower, prized open the
wooden shutters with a dagger and killed the sleeping Sir Ralph. A
possible matter of treason that brings Sir John Cranston, Lord
Coroner of London, to the Tower of London with his scribe, Brother
Athelstan.
The House of the Red
Slayer is surprisingly conventionally-structured during most of
the first half of the story with Sir Ralph's family-and social circle
filling the small pool of suspects.
There's his daughter,
Philippa, who's betrothed to Geoffrey Parchmeiner. A young man who
enjoyed the approval and trust of his prospective father-in-law. A
brother, Sir Fulke Whitton, who can expect to inherit a chunk of his
estate. A mute Moorish servant, Rastani, whose conversion to
Christianity is doubted and has a reason to harbor a grudge against
his master. Gilbert Colebrooke is his disgruntled lieutenant and
wanted Sir Ralph's post for himself. A chaplain, William Hammond,
whom Sir Ralph "caught selling food stocks from the Tower
stores." Finally, there are two friends of Sir Ralph, Sir
Gerard Mowbray and Sir Brian Fitzormonde, who are now hospitaller
knights, but served with Sir Ralph in Egypt.
So most of the first half
of the story is told as a traditional, Golden Age-style detective
story with its focus primarily on the mysterious murder in the tower
room and there only two, very minor, subplots dangling in the
background – concerning Cranston's marital problems and the
desecration of Athelstan's churchyard. The Great Community is "plotting treason and rebellion" in the shadows, but these
plot-strands barely have a presence.
Doherty is a cruel God who
cannot be appeased, or satisfied, with a single, measly corpse and
the wholesale bloodletting in the prologue proved to have been the
soup severed before the meal.
A second victim slipped
from a parapet and spattered his brains on the sharp, icy cobbles
below, which coincided with the sounding of the tocsin bell, but that "great brass tongue only tolled when the Tower was under
attack." Something that was not the case and when the soldiers
went to investigate, they found only "the claw marks of the
ravens" in the snow surrounding the bell! A minor impossibility
of the no-footprints variety with a simple, but good, explanation.
After this second murderer stops being subtly and the murders that
follow are even by Doherty's standard savagely brutal and gory, which
is underlined by his unfurnished depiction of the times.
Doherty doesn't
romanticize the past and has no problem with the showing the stinking
streets, the heaps of human waste and the unwashed masses or how the
frost tortured the wandering lepers and slaying beggars huddled in
their rags – while the blackened corpses of river pirates hung
picturesquely from the low scaffolds. And remember that this is
supposed to be a Christmas-themed mystery novel!
Regrettably, The House
of the Red Slayer is a better historical novel than a detective
story, because the murderer is not is difficult to spot or hard to
figure out who this person was in the prologue and motivated this
person. But it was admirable the way in which Doherty tried to
misdirect the reader by presenting one of the murders in a very
different light than you would expect from him, but that's what
immediately aroused my suspicion. Once you look at that murder as a
[redacted], there's only one person who could have done it. So, yeah,
I didn't reach the same conclusion as Brother Athelstan with a
dazzling piece of armchair reasoning, but the scant clueing made that
nigh impossible anyway.
The House of the Red
Slayer is one of those Doherty novels that is strong on
historical content and writing, but have weak clueing and a plot that
is easy to pick apart. So not the strongest title in the series, but,
as a historical novel presented as a detective story, it's a very
immersive read and the idea to "camouflage" one of the murders
was a genuinely clever touch. Even if it can give the whole game away
to a reader who has consumed an unholy amount of detective fiction.











